Michael J. Falotico Poet Tetractys

Puddles of Dreams

Dreams
                                                            fill my
                                                      head and spill
                                                       out on paper
                                 surrendering my thoughts that are now seen..
                                  Much like a small puddle that rain drops find
                                                      and soon over
                                                     fills and spreads
                                                          down the
                                                              page.

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 14, 2011 at 5:48 PM am thinking of writing a novel ..short one.. 12 chapters but 12 racy ones.. with all the luv poetry so many poets have told me I should attempt this .. don't know if I can be that committed luv.. but thinking on it.. did start my autobiography a few years ago.. but again got bored.. so stopped after a few chapters..oh me.. I am so restless .. need excitement every minute.. with thoughts across the GW Michael.. with luv forever ..and always.. and beyond..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 30, 2011 at 6:19 PM glad your AC is on too Michael..seems u are my muse for these cravings luv... do u mind? am enjoying the creative process with dreamy delights of imaginatiion...mmmmmm.. your Jersey Girl in ultra mode.. with luv always and forever..

Cory Long July 30, 2011 at 9:29 AM I love it and love the form I had a lot of fun writing my entry for you.. cory

Wilma Neels July 29, 2011 at 2:05 PM I almost missed this gem Michael ;) had to smile while reading it.. Awesome write!! Lfde Wilma

Andrea Dietrich July 26, 2011 at 9:14 PM wow, your excellent model poem is the winner in MY book! Good to see this. Luv, Andrea

Sidney Beck July 26, 2011 at 11:52 AM tetractys is not an easy form...very tight lines etc.....nice "flow" to this one my friend,.....(I've been away on business and have fallen behind in the Soup but I'm busy catching up with everyone as fast as possible L O L)

James Peranteau July 26, 2011 at 11:08 AM Wonderful example dear poet ! I have been readin many of the souls writes entering your contest...it's gonna be hard sir ! lol Have a great time judging....much love, james

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 25, 2011 at 11:26 AM wishing u a happy Monday Michael.. am at beach still ..have a visitor..haha.. talks ensuing..luv.. keeping fingers crossed.. but in reality is your Jersey Girl...always with luv..

Dinda Minardi July 25, 2011 at 11:25 AM This is very creative, Michael. You have a lot of poem about dreams, but I never feel bored to read them. that is amazing!

Kabuteng P.Ink K. July 25, 2011 at 1:33 AM Ah I sure enjoyed this one! Love how you say "puddles of dreams" quite tangible and yet not as well--- just a missing r in surrendering -I am sure you will have beauties for entries again-- thank you very much for my wonderful placement in your last contest :) enjoy your week and hugs your way :) You sure are loving tetractys right now , hmm :) Rightly so, it is a beautiful form :D

Fabiyas M V July 25, 2011 at 12:06 AM Quite exceptional way of presentation,friend.You are very talented writer

Rachel Heffington July 24, 2011 at 7:25 PM I love the format of this poem. It's so cool! It looks like the words are really spilling out onto the paper! :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 24, 2011 at 7:05 PM and to our eyes to ingest the beauty of elegant poetry Michael.... fascinating words to example for us to create ..must check out the rules posted as I am anxious to enter ..hope u will enter my "DISNEY" one as well luv..simple... looking forward to mesmerizing u luv.. as your words always do me.... your J.G. in creative mode at the beach... Venus kisses....

Jun-Jun Villanueva July 24, 2011 at 7:00 PM oh. . .i enter the contest. .hope you like it. .I just wrote what thoughts came to my mind. .hehehe. . . .~~~~~ >>>>> SMILE ~~~~ *-*junjun

Tim B July 24, 2011 at 5:32 PM And a fine example it is. I like the line "surrendering my thoughts that are now seen..." Michael J. Falotico July 24, 2011 at 5:41 PM Thank you Tim for this comment and all the others , means a lot... Hope you write for the contest....Michael