Puddles In the Mist

A gentle rain falls
as puddles reflect gray skies
 A love that once was
 now disappears in the mist
and  the  tears reflect the pain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kovrlija Avatar
October 28, 2012 at 1:43 AM
I enjoyed reading your poem.
Dietrich Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 5:48 PM
wow, I am seeing some awesome reflecting poems!! this is a winner.
Gooden Avatar
October 26, 2012 at 8:14 PM
HI Joseph, rain and tears fall but they disappear like the mist. Enjoyed. Sherese
Poet Avatar
October 26, 2012 at 7:46 PM
A very touching Tanka here Joseph.Lovely read.
A   Avatar
October 26, 2012 at 7:30 PM
Hello, Joseph :-) deep image,,,thanks for sharing* always~ PD
Kamal Avatar
October 26, 2012 at 6:26 PM
I love this Tanka! so touching I pictured the words and felt them...good job!
May Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 5:39 AM
thank you Omneya
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