Puddles and Hope

The rain falls down
on the barren hills and plains.
Water seeks lanes and yards,
Since the rills,and drains,
And local ponds vanished.

On the roads,
Passing cars splash water,
Dirty on paddlers' clothes,
As they leap high
To avoid the mess.
They jump again and again
Through the potholes,
Dodging the distress.

If rain lingers long
Water will flow,,
Covering the roads and
Flooding the localities.

Let's bear this all,
For without rain
Water scarcity will occur next season
And rice production will fall.

Cherish each drop,
For in every storm and puddle
Lies the hope of survival.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
March 9, 2025 at 3:20 PM
The poem of yours called 4 legged divinity doed not present a nice for me to comment. Maybe just how my phone is acting. Anyway. I come here to say it was an enjoyable poem. I think some dogs are so special. I had one that was. A long time ago .
Singh Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 11:18 PM
Thank you
Rolland Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 1:31 AM
rain can be a bless, it depends on countries, more deep are your words, thanks
Singh Avatar
March 8, 2025 at 7:47 PM
Thank you.
Andresen Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 6:19 AM
- Rain gives hope to many, Akham - Some need it more than others ... we have rain all year round ... maybe a couple of weeks in the summer we are without ... not fairly distributed - hugs
Singh Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 6:23 AM
Thank you
Buhagiar Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 3:33 AM
I read once how you grow rice in Asia. Very interesting.
Singh Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 6:22 AM
Thank you
Greenhough Avatar
March 4, 2025 at 5:41 PM
Interesting information, as you tell it. It reminds me of yin yan. A destructive force has an opposite force that does good. Rice has kept a lot of people alive. I really like your stories. The verses have a favorable meter.
Singh Avatar
March 4, 2025 at 7:44 PM
Thank you
Dietrich Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 9:53 AM
A lovely portrayal of something I never grew up seeing but it's so cool to get a flavor of the world on your side of it
Singh Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 7:24 PM
Thank you
Rodrigues Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 5:44 AM
A bit of angst during the wet season, but it is also needed. Enjoyed your write!
Singh Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 7:24 PM
Thank you
Empress Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 5:11 AM
Its been raining alot here. And now as i read this, i cant help but cherish every drop, and appreciate what rain brings dor us, very well written, profound and powerful poem that conveys an important message too. Pleasure reading this dear Akham, sending you light always
Singh Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 7:24 PM
Thank you
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