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On an early day in late spring, as dragonflies dance and birds sing, on top a dock where I've grown fond, butterflies gather by the pond Cattails sway in the morning breeze, as do the crowns of nearby trees, this view I see the world beyond, butterflies gather by the pond As ripples in the water form, and playful fish frolic in swarm, without words we all correspond, butterflies gather by the pond On an early day in late spring, butterflies gather by the pond.

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Date: 3/10/2024 12:58:00 AM
This is a wonderful Kyrielle Shane I really enjoyed it, I stopped by hoping to find a new poem. Have you been busy ? Edward has a new competition (hint hint) . I guess I will just be patient and wait. Best wishes Wen.
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Shane Thacker
Date: 3/11/2024 6:07:00 PM
Wen! I hope you're well. Yes, I've been fairly busy the last few weeks. However, I plan to be able to sit down and commit some time to writing this weekend. I'm going to look into Edward's contest now.
Date: 2/8/2024 4:23:00 PM
A well-written Kyrielle, Shane. A very similar form to an 8 syllables per line sonnet. The poem fit the form well. Nice imagery and the poem had a nice rhythm to it. Great rhythming throughout. Have a great weekend! A poet in Texas, Bill
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Shane Thacker
Date: 2/8/2024 4:38:00 PM
Thank you, Bill. This was my first Kyrielle. Such a challenge!
Date: 1/28/2024 10:52:00 AM
The amazing relationship between life and water depicted nicely in your poem today
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Shane Thacker
Date: 1/28/2024 11:00:00 AM
Thank you, Tom. I appreciated you taking the time to read it.

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