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Puddin - Has a Tummy Ache

Crikey mates, I don't know what to make? I'm pretty sure this platty; has a tummy ache Puddin begged his friends for relief and aid; Perhaps it was the worm stew; or shrimp cocktail he had made? No matter what it was; in his belly, the price was being paid Koala, and Roo good friends that they are, came to render assistance But first; they sequestered the iPad from Roos, Joey, with much resistance "It says here you're a mammal." Koala read from the screen We should find the answers in no time; to why your tum tum, is being so mean Roo asked him directly; "What have you eaten this fine day?" To which the platty replied; with a shrug, "Whatever gets in my way" When at that very moment, Koala's jaw began to drop! Which took longer; then a three toe sloth, to reach full stop Puddin, "You can't have something that you don't possess" Your insides are without a stomach; a one-way food poo, express!

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Date: 3/18/2023 1:12:00 PM
A cute/fun~story/write. Great ending. Have a great/blessed day writing away...........
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Date: 3/19/2023 7:29:00 AM
Thank you Paula!! I hope you did not find this offensive. But you bear striking resemblance to my grandmother that first introduced me to poetry. A truly remarkable woman! Solemn reverence A.S.
Date: 3/15/2023 10:49:00 AM
Awwww, so cute, A.S.!
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Date: 3/15/2023 6:50:00 PM
Thank you for reading this one Paige and the really nice compliment! Warmly A.S.
Date: 3/15/2023 7:56:00 AM
Oh how funny. :)
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Date: 3/15/2023 8:01:00 AM
:) thanks for chuckling Fin lol. Best regards A.S.
Date: 3/14/2023 10:59:00 AM
Giggles galore ;D
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Date: 3/14/2023 11:02:00 AM
I am having a lot of fun with him making both educational and a little funny with each poem that I write on this subject. Regards A.S.

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