David Fisher Poet Rhyme

Pub-Lish

As I went to get published,
Stopped for ale and grub.
At a place called the Longfish;
Which is a great pub.

Well that first book it got scrubbed;
Thrown in the rubbish.
So now when I seek a pub,
It must end in lish.



For 7/5 Trochee Contest

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Skat A May 3, 2015 at 9:51 PM David, Congratulations on your Trochee poem win. :) SKAT

Paul Callus May 2, 2015 at 12:32 PM A witty and unique take, David. Congrats on your win. // paul

Jan Allison May 2, 2015 at 6:56 AM Dropping back with my congrats David:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich May 2, 2015 at 1:01 AM Though the meter was a bit strained for this form, your cleverness redeemed it. For originality I had to put you on top ten. congrats!

Skat A May 2, 2015 at 12:50 AM DAVID:) Congratulations! Forever ~SKAT~

Hannington Mumo April 11, 2015 at 12:49 AM A great humorous piece.#7

Andrea Dietrich April 8, 2015 at 6:31 PM good one, and clever!

M. L. Kiser April 8, 2015 at 1:01 AM Now that's clever!

Emile Pinet April 7, 2015 at 6:24 PM You have a quick wit and an enviable imagination. Emile.

Jan Allison April 7, 2015 at 5:58 PM Love the humour David - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx