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A teenage girl defied her ma
And went downtown without her bra
But no boys were there
And girls did not care
What a dud thrill "Life in the Raw"!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Laurie Avatar
November 27, 2020 at 8:01 PM
G’day Rico … was her idea that it might drag the wrinkles out of her face - catch you later Rico - Lindsay
One Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 5:41 AM
Lol.. silly girl...
Roper Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 8:02 PM
Good one , Rico.
Wolf Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 5:45 PM
Hahahah! Very clever, Rico! Love that last line. Huzzah! :) gw
Y. Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 12:43 PM
Hi Rico, You excel in the limerick form. I enjoyed the read:-) Alexis
Canerdy Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 11:49 AM
Aww, she put on a show for nothing!
Allison Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 11:33 AM
good one:-) hugs Jan xx
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