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A teenage girl defied her ma And went downtown without her bra But no boys were there And girls did not care What a dud thrill "Life in the Raw"!

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Date: 11/27/2020 8:01:00 PM
G’day Rico … was her idea that it might drag the wrinkles out of her face - catch you later Rico - Lindsay
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Date: 11/19/2020 5:41:00 AM
Lol.. silly girl...
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Date: 11/18/2020 8:02:00 PM
Good one , Rico.
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Date: 11/18/2020 5:45:00 PM
Hahahah! Very clever, Rico! Love that last line. Huzzah! :) gw
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Date: 11/18/2020 12:43:00 PM
Hi Rico, You excel in the limerick form. I enjoyed the read:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/18/2020 11:49:00 AM
Aww, she put on a show for nothing!
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Date: 11/18/2020 11:33:00 AM
good one:-) hugs Jan xx
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