Ptsd

PTSD, this is nothing that's new,
it's just a new label to stick on you
They now blame it on the wars today,
unless for your trauma they have to pay.
Then all of a sudden, it changes it's name,
and you are accused of the malingering game.
So you lost an eye, arm or a leg or two,
that's happened for years, it's nothing new.
No one over the years ever tried to explain,
when you scream and shout they say your insane.
You could fight and yell until you were numb,
then they hid you away in the insane asylum.
Now in the 21st century, they start to see,
that your moaning and griping is reality.
Your suffering can't be swept under the mat,
too many now shouting, we deserve better than that.
We were beaten, spit on, blown up and abused,
why should we take this, we're not the accused.
We did our duty as we were ordered to on the day,
now all we ask for is a sense of fair play.
Years ago when into a corner we would flee,
from years of molestation and depravity.
Whether your a child or have already grown old,
you have a story that needs  to be told,
If your in authority listen to me please.
This pain hidden inside is not a disease

© Dave Timperley 19 August 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 7/24/2017 8:57:00 PM
Very well said. A great poem with a message. At least it is now recognized, and there is help available, but more needs to be done, not only the individual but families who suffer as well. Blessings again, Vivien
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Date: 7/25/2017 4:52:00 AM
Hi Vivien, thanks for reading and for your comments. PTSD is something that if you have it, you know you have it. If you do not have it, then you do not have a clue and now those who can help are slowly, and I do mean slowly, beginning to give help where it is needed. Sadly for some, it is too late. God Bless. D.
Date: 8/19/2016 5:45:00 AM
Absolutely so ... Very well written ... All PTSD subjects should read this poem ... Very pertinent ... PTSD can be mitigated through psychoanalysis which is active listening /unconditional listening ... and certain other behavioural therapies ...
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Date: 8/19/2016 6:44:00 AM
Thank you Probir, It first has to be recognized, by those who can help, that the subject is actually suffering, this is the major stumbling block. All must be treated as suffering before those who are not can be weeded out. God Bless. D.
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