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Psychotic Patunia Embrace

So very sad her world has become, Barely withstanding, the wind and the sun In a blink of an eye, we can all plainly see, Resemblence of the infamous...Patunia Marie So very large, that she can barely stand, No worries, no worries, A wheelchair is close at hand. All of her hopes, and all of her dreams, have dwindled in gods wonderous light, The flame is now only used, To accomidate, Her new and improved, crackpipe Poor Patunia, rotted within, The bowels of the earth, No sooner it was alive Then saddened by her birth. The stench and the obesity, Was prominent within her soul, That the petals weighed so heavily, Which inturn has taken its toll. All her anger and all her hate, Wanted our family to fall apart, Poor patunia, now you are hopelessly alone, left in the dark So all the anger and all the evil, that you so caringly display, has finally followed you home, inflicting you, each and every day You now must be aware, Of the harm you have incurred, To the ones who once loved you, and is now all just a blurr. by, manuela

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/8/2010 5:43:00 AM
A wonderful ballad, I love the poetic treatment of the story. Welcome to poetry soup, my friend.
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Date: 1/25/2010 3:23:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Manuela. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/24/2010 11:43:00 PM
Great use of words and the intent is very well focused! Keep up the good writing!
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