Psychotic Daydream

all around me are demonic voices! telling me ,telling me ,all i must do is 
complete insanity to feel tomarrow, all have sarow. 
and thats whats killing me just to be free ive completed insanity so whats that leave 
me but complete ensanity????????????
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June 16, 2016 at 3:12 PM
Caleb,, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. **SKAT**
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April 16, 2010 at 6:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Caleb. If you would like to have more of your poetry read please limit your postings to 3-5 poems per day. In doing this more of your poetry is read and other poets can also have theirs read. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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April 15, 2010 at 12:37 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... luv.. "Sweetheart"
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April 15, 2010 at 12:05 PM
You entered this poem in my contest, however,all places are filled, I am awaiting the poems and I have assigned specific topics to each person, if you read the contest description, it is explained, so I respectfully ask that you, to please remove this poem from the contest, it cannot be considered. A new contest will be commencing right after this one is judged, should you be interested..Constance
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April 15, 2010 at 9:37 AM
Hmm...well i think this isnt too bad, but could be muchhh better if you fix your spelling. .:rain:.
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