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Psychic Woes

Flutters a crocodile gecko his thick-edged tail, And licks his sticky lips with his twisted tongue; His eyes ablaze with fire, and in his abdomen, Rotten corpses stand erect like haunting tombs. And now - withering thuds of heavy strides Drown the boulder, the child’s hideout, And a wretch with a deep cut on his right jaw Towers, beclouding him like a deformed ghost. A tender home gecko breaks his own tiny tail As a trick to escape from Crocodile’s grip, Yet Crocodile lands on the tailor-less soul, Seizes him by his neck, and they wrestle and fall. Wresting - rustling stops, and sky stands higher; Nature’s slow somber music laments in a choir. 14 lines Jan. 12, 2021 (Originally posted on Aug. 11, 2020) PODIUM PLACING PROMISE(7) Poetry Contest Contest sponsor: Brian Strand *A 2nd Place* in the following contest (judged on Aug. 18, 2020) Aug. 11, 2020 INFLICTIONS Poetry Contest Sponsor: Silent One

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Date: 1/13/2021 11:55:00 AM
Powerful words and images in your story of struggle and sadness, Newton. Well written. Congratulations, kudos and blessings to you! Sam
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 1/13/2021 2:58:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sam, for your read between lines, the great comment and the congrats!!
Date: 8/19/2020 6:54:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in Silent One's contest: INFLICTIONS :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/19/2020 4:30:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne!! Having a place in Silent One's contest and your comment is a great honour!!
Date: 8/15/2020 3:57:00 AM
Love that last line, seems like a horrific incident... Congratulations on your placement in the contest.
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Date: 8/15/2020 6:47:00 AM
Thank you so much for selecting my piece for a placement in this contest, your read and the great comment!! It's a great honour!!
Date: 8/11/2020 9:30:00 AM
Potent penning!
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Date: 8/11/2020 9:41:00 AM
Thank you so much, Maureen, for this amazingly sweet comment!!

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