Psychic Woes

Flutters a crocodile gecko his thick-edged tail,
And licks his sticky lips with his twisted tongue; 
His eyes ablaze with fire, and in his abdomen, 
Rotten corpses stand erect like haunting tombs.

And now - withering thuds of heavy strides
Drown the boulder, the child’s hideout, 
And a wretch with a deep cut on his right jaw 
Towers, beclouding him like a deformed ghost. 

A tender home gecko breaks his own tiny tail 
As a trick to escape from Crocodile’s grip,
Yet Crocodile lands on the tailor-less soul, 
Seizes him by his neck, and they wrestle and fall.

Wresting - rustling stops, and sky stands higher;
Nature’s slow somber music laments in a choir. 


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Jan. 12, 2021 (Originally posted on Aug. 11, 2020)
 PODIUM PLACING PROMISE(7) Poetry Contest
Contest sponsor: Brian Strand 

 *A 2nd Place* in the following contest (judged on Aug. 18, 2020)
Aug. 11, 2020
INFLICTIONS Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Silent One
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Kauffman Avatar
January 13, 2021 at 11:55 AM
Powerful words and images in your story of struggle and sadness, Newton. Well written. Congratulations, kudos and blessings to you! Sam
Ranaweera  Avatar
January 13, 2021 at 2:58 PM
Thank you so much, Sam, for your read between lines, the great comment and the congrats!!
Andresen Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 6:54 AM
- Congratulations on your win in Silent One's contest: INFLICTIONS :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Ranaweera  Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 4:30 PM
Thank you so much, Anne!! Having a place in Silent One's contest and your comment is a great honour!!
One Avatar
August 15, 2020 at 3:57 AM
Love that last line, seems like a horrific incident... Congratulations on your placement in the contest.
Ranaweera  Avatar
August 15, 2020 at 6:47 AM
Thank you so much for selecting my piece for a placement in this contest, your read and the great comment!! It's a great honour!!
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August 11, 2020 at 9:30 AM
Potent penning!
Ranaweera  Avatar
August 11, 2020 at 9:41 AM
Thank you so much, Maureen, for this amazingly sweet comment!!
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