Laura Leiser Poet Free verse

Psychedelic Landscapes

Midnight skies light up in a neon swirl of colors
               with rainbow reams of light, shooting transient pathways
                       that blaze momentary lines of prism hues
                       like a brilliant comet leaving a sizzling trail
              a color wheel of reds, yellows, blues, purples and greens
                  swirl of colors, going round and round, in my mind.





Written on 6/4/2016

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David Mohn June 6, 2016 at 8:20 PM Congrats Laura...wonderful detail in your images Laura Leiser June 6, 2016 at 10:52 PM Thank you, David :)

Beautiful Scars June 6, 2016 at 6:19 PM Laura, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo Laura Leiser June 6, 2016 at 10:51 PM Thanks, Laura :)

Sandra Haight June 6, 2016 at 5:21 PM Hi Laura, love the way you interpreted this visual prompt! Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra Laura Leiser June 6, 2016 at 10:51 PM Thank you, Sandra :)

Nette Onclaud June 6, 2016 at 4:55 PM colorful view on your mind... warm congrats on your placement in my contest, laura.. huggs Laura Leiser June 6, 2016 at 5:11 PM Thank you for my placement in your fine contest, Nette! I appreciate it :)

Jan Allison June 6, 2016 at 4:53 PM Very beautiful imagery Laura congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx Laura Leiser June 6, 2016 at 5:12 PM Thank you, Jan :)

Janice Canerdy June 6, 2016 at 8:41 AM Very creative--a 7--Laura. Janice Laura Leiser June 6, 2016 at 5:12 PM Thank you, Janice :)

Frederic Parker June 4, 2016 at 9:28 PM A hard visual to be so descriptive about, yet your poem has done that..well done and good luck Laura Leiser June 4, 2016 at 11:02 PM Thank you, Frederic! Soup mail :)

CayCay Godwin June 4, 2016 at 8:21 PM Great imagery and feel for the contest! You done good, Laura. Best of luck in all things, including the contest ... CayCay Laura Leiser June 4, 2016 at 8:25 PM Thanks, CayCay, for the quick response to my poem! I'm really happy you like it :)