Psychedelic Aspiration

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Written: January 06, 2023 ____________________________________ Nighttime hypnotic dreams flow a starry heart swirls heavenly sequins sparkle, gold moonlight reflects off crystal seas an evening full of wonder an exquisite tapestry, a secret story, pure opal-colored mist as you moonwalk, be astounded.   A whispered melody carries the allure of a summer night pearly moonlight falls on trees, a gleaming breeze-kissed track lucid, synchronized star trails floating akin to a precious gem origami nebulae with avid care, sparks seldom appear quiet dwarf firefly with jewel-like lights fliers soar through the night, exuberant filigree wings their gentle glow soothes Void. Amidst the mayhem, we have visions a global canvas upholds hope vivid acrylics fit well with warm ochres, creativity abounds as the sun sets the glow of a fantasy is stellar a soft glow leads the way glitter and dance are in sync, Incredible for everybody night gradually awakens this grand adventure fuels dreams, fireflies are lighting up our path woods and meadows hide secrets light reveals verdant grass. altering the location.

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Date: 1/8/2024 4:23:00 PM
I started to read this the other day and got distracted. I have to say in all honesty that this is exquisite and right up the alley of what I like in poetry. Cosmic, larger than life, ethereal. A fave for me Lasaad
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Date: 1/7/2024 10:25:00 AM
Nice poem
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Date: 1/7/2024 8:43:00 AM
Your poem beautifully encapsulates the enchanting essence of a night-time landscape, weaving together vivid imagery and evocative language to create a dreamlike atmosphere. The use of celestial motifs, natural elements, and the interplay of light and darkness crafts a captivating scene that invites readers into a world of wonder... An excellent poem my friend..
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Date: 1/7/2024 7:29:00 AM
You capture "the allure of a summer night" well Sotto, best wishes
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Date: 1/7/2024 12:16:00 AM
Gosh, this is instantly going in my FAVs, dear Sotti!! What a majestically enchanting and charismatic poem you've painted with profound brushstrokes of your artistic quill! So beautifully you've described that even forlorn flickers of shimmers can hue a coruscating light amidst darkness and guide our way.. The imagery and metaphors you've woven here are absolutely impeccable with a magical glow of the gorgeous flow.. "Dwarf firefly with jewel-like lights", "Pure opal-colored mist" Just stunning!
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Date: 1/7/2024 12:02:00 AM
So true despite the chaos and difficulties we still find a way to cosmically allow our spirit to soar amongst all that which is ethereal. I really love the flow of this and how creative your imagery is: so descriptive and galactic. So many lines in this stood out for me along with the mellifluous wordplay throughout that adds a touch of musicality to your flow of free verse is truly impressive! This is one of my fave free verse from you. You’ve nailed it! From fireflies to jewel like lights!
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Date: 1/6/2024 8:59:00 PM
A lovely poem, Psychedelic Aspiration, is full of color and light and night and day. I see it as a walk in many places of new discoveries. I love ready this type of verse.
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