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Psychedelic Aspiration

Written: January 06, 2023
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Nighttime hypnotic dreams flow
a starry heart swirls
heavenly sequins sparkle,
gold moonlight reflects off crystal seas
an evening full of wonder
an exquisite tapestry, a secret story,
pure opal-colored mist
as you moonwalk, be astounded.
 
A whispered melody carries
the allure of a summer night
pearly moonlight falls on trees,
a gleaming breeze-kissed track
lucid, synchronized star trails
floating akin to a precious gem
origami nebulae with avid care,
sparks seldom appear quiet
dwarf firefly with jewel-like lights
fliers soar through the night,
exuberant filigree wings
their gentle glow soothes Void.

Amidst the mayhem, we have visions
a global canvas upholds hope
vivid acrylics fit well with warm ochres,
creativity abounds as the sun sets
the glow of a fantasy is stellar
a soft glow leads the way
glitter and dance are in sync,
Incredible for everybody
night gradually awakens
this grand adventure fuels dreams,
fireflies are lighting up our path
woods and meadows hide secrets
light reveals verdant grass.
altering the location.

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Jay Narain January 7, 2024 at 10:25 AM Nice poem

Silent One January 7, 2024 at 8:43 AM Your poem beautifully encapsulates the enchanting essence of a night-time landscape, weaving together vivid imagery and evocative language to create a dreamlike atmosphere. The use of celestial motifs, natural elements, and the interplay of light and darkness crafts a captivating scene that invites readers into a world of wonder... An excellent poem my friend..

Joseph May January 7, 2024 at 7:29 AM You capture "the allure of a summer night" well Sotto, best wishes

Hiya Sharma January 7, 2024 at 12:16 AM Gosh, this is instantly going in my FAVs, dear Sotti!! What a majestically enchanting and charismatic poem you've painted with profound brushstrokes of your artistic quill! So beautifully you've described that even forlorn flickers of shimmers can hue a coruscating light amidst darkness and guide our way.. The imagery and metaphors you've woven here are absolutely impeccable with a magical glow of the gorgeous flow.. "Dwarf firefly with jewel-like lights", "Pure opal-colored mist" Just stunning!

Ink Empress January 7, 2024 at 12:02 AM So true despite the chaos and difficulties we still find a way to cosmically allow our spirit to soar amongst all that which is ethereal. I really love the flow of this and how creative your imagery is: so descriptive and galactic. So many lines in this stood out for me along with the mellifluous wordplay throughout that adds a touch of musicality to your flow of free verse is truly impressive! This is one of my fave free verse from you. You’ve nailed it! From fireflies to jewel like lights!

Hilda Greenhough January 6, 2024 at 8:59 PM A lovely poem, Psychedelic Aspiration, is full of color and light and night and day. I see it as a walk in many places of new discoveries. I love ready this type of verse.