Notes About The Poem

PSAPPHO: it is how  Sappho spelled her name before driven out by male egos from her birthplace in Greece.

*‘now she stands out among Lydian women as after sunset the rose-fingered moon exceeds all stars’: From fragment 96 of Sappho’s lyric poetry.

Ares embodies the physical valour necessary for success in war but can also personify sheer brutality and bloodlust.

My poem is not only a lament, but a threnody of resistance in Sapphic stanzas. Ending each stanza with a spondee, gives it the same emphatic closure that ancient threnodies carried in ritual chant.

Sapphic stanza – named for Sappho:

3 lines of:  /*/*  /**  /*/* [11 syllables]

The final Adonic line (L4): /**// [5 syllables]

Originally her stanza was unrhymed, but during the Middle Ages it adapted a rhyme scheme of abab.

Psappho Wept

Days of poet motivate calm compassion.
Sheer injustice evident—every turnpike
manned by soldiers’ wild unfamiliar passion 
planned around harsh Strike.

Summonsed lamb to slaughter, but still respecting
burning bush—obedience lit by daydream, 
Ares now advance with his pride, suspecting
alter in regime.

Bending truth to suit the occasion’s essence,  
whispers coil in shadows of veiled renitence. 
Glow of waters lap at the swirling valence.
Ebbing of sentience.

Psappho wept—her dream has dispersed as token.
Rose-fingered moon’s face will exceed all starlight.*
Silence now descends tableau muffled, Brocken
Spectre of moonlight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Hind Avatar
January 21, 2026 at 5:55 PM
This is gorgeous, Suzette. WOW. I suspect that her life ended as you mysteriously suggested. A beautiful title quite fitting- a fav <3
Richards Avatar
January 22, 2026 at 12:02 AM
From all accounts, she was a gentle soul and from a prominent Greek family - well-educated. The final stanza came to me as I was contemplating the many violent deaths of poets and wish to counterbalance it with more fitting (to my mind) ending. Thank you for reading and your kind comment, Paige.
Goldsmith Avatar
January 19, 2026 at 7:44 AM
What a write/story you have here. I enjoyed reading. Thanks for the note on top. Great Picture... Have a lovely day/week writing away.................
Richards Avatar
January 19, 2026 at 8:02 AM
Thank you for the visit and kind comment, Paula.
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