Psalm of the Sickly Sinner

Smite me, my Father.
Oh yeah!! Smite me!
Grab me by the handles and pump me full of your Love.
Bend me in all directions.

Hurt me my Father, as I have hurt You.
We are forever separate.

I open my mouth, stick out my tongue.
Salivating for Your salvation.
In holy communion I am unburdened,
as you prod me with Your Light.

Do you love me, my Father? Even just a little?!
Have I pleased You, my Father?
If not, well then punish me!
Smite me!!
HURT ME!!!!!

So long as we're apart,
I am eternally deserving.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Anderson Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 2:42 PM
wow. this is strong writing, brother. this needs to be in a book
Bloomsfield Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 2:31 PM
Who can punish Yoni?not our Father in Heaven,I'm sure,love your unique style!
A   Avatar
June 8, 2010 at 7:07 PM
Wow.. strong and deep write, enjoyed...p.d.
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