Psalm of Good-Bye

Psalm of good-bye

                                                                 
Who will cry when you die?
To this question I reply
Shall shed tears the sombre sky
With a shimmering face if we die!

Like a full blown flower
Brimming with nectar,
Our lives should prosper
For the honey bees to hover

For the scattering petals, Heaven shall cry
' cruel death'! the folk shall fie
With a mournful face the world shall cry
With a smiling face let us  bid good- bye!!

Dr.Hemant Vinze
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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December 4, 2008 at 7:36 AM
Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
Jordan Avatar
November 29, 2008 at 8:49 PM
Dr.Hemant - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
Brown Avatar
November 19, 2008 at 4:26 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
Winter Avatar
November 11, 2008 at 7:51 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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August 1, 2008 at 1:35 PM
Congrats on your poem being featured this week. God Bless Phyl
Brown Avatar
July 30, 2008 at 4:41 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Dr.Vinze . Love, Carol
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July 28, 2008 at 7:06 AM
Congratulations Doctor, on your poem being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince
Winter Avatar
July 28, 2008 at 6:12 AM
Truly great to read this once again. Congratulations on this wonderful write being featured once more. Love, Shar
Jordan Avatar
July 28, 2008 at 6:11 AM
Very interesting poem - congrats on being featured
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