Ps, My Hidden World

Amidst of distress and forsaken time,
         A haven place I found, my hidden world.
            A faraway land that gives me hope.
            A newfound happiness and rejoice.

                Walking alone in the dark,
              I saw the stars shining bright.
                The torch lit in the corner,
            Lifts my soul, keeps me  warmth.

    In my dying moment, a community lend a hand.
     Wipe away all my tears, leaving a sweet smile.
             People are so thoughtful and kind.
              Some are naughty, some are wild.

                This is where I build my dreams.
           This is where I learned to fly,soar high.
                In this world, I become a real me.
   This is the place where I can hide, I can be proud!

            PS, you gave me meaning to survive!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Tidd Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 11:49 AM
Nice job. It is nice to find a place with supportive people. Now. . .point me to the naughty, wild peoples! :)
Torres Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 11:50 AM
ha ha..Jim...i don't think you're one of those..lol!!! ..thank you for dropping in.. ^__^
Tacito Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 11:12 PM
Hard-hitting & a focused dedication to that "light" at the end of your tunnel. This was awesome.
Torres Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 8:25 AM
Yo!!! ..the hottest DJ here @ PS... i'm glad to have your comment... Thanks A lot!! ..you're one of the light shining brightly at this site... kudos!!! ^__^
Smith Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 5:16 PM
This a beautiful piece Aiyah... PS is a great place ....Hugs Tim
Torres Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 8:26 AM
THank you, Tim...=) you are such a great man as well..!!! ^__^
A   Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 3:34 PM
Hi AiyaH, I like your hidden world. It was my hidden world for almost 4 years. This place has its ups and downs.. That is why it's so real in a funny kind of way. How long have you been writing? You look so young.. Missed you... Glad to be back... Hope you don't get tired of hearing from me, or seeing me around.. I'm back and looking forward, picking up where I left off... hehehehe, I'm kidding, that's not possible.... I will enjoy all who enjoy me, that's a good start. Right. love ~LINDA
Torres Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 8:45 AM
just a heads up...i'm 27 now... a working mom of 4 beautiful young ladies... =))
Torres Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 3:57 PM
my Dear Linda.. Welcome back to our world!!! ..i started here @ PS last year, (october) ...and i felt sad when i didn't see your comment welcoming me..ha ha..just kidding....i started writing since 8..and became a journalist during high school...and now, it's my addiction!! ...BUT you know what???....I'm so glad that you're back.. =))
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