Provocative Haiku

Provocative Haiku

Garments flow and fall
River, cold, drinks naked girls
Red faced, swimming up
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
August 25, 2014 at 5:17 PM
lots of imagery flooding this river poem!
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August 25, 2014 at 6:07 PM
Hi Andrea, I didn't want to become too provocative. The imagination needs to run, or in this instance, swim, free. Thank you for your interest. Take it easy. Earl
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