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Provocative Haiku

Provocative Haiku Garments flow and fall River, cold, drinks naked girls Red faced, swimming up

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Date: 8/25/2014 5:17:00 PM
lots of imagery flooding this river poem!
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 8/25/2014 6:07:00 PM
Hi Andrea, I didn't want to become too provocative. The imagination needs to run, or in this instance, swim, free. Thank you for your interest. Take it easy. Earl