Proviso a Freed Verse
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THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FREED VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment
PROVISO
atmosphere
still &calm
a source
of light
exquisite
elegant
unprecedented
anticipated
intriguingly
the
quietude:
is more perplexing
mysterious
& elusive
shadowy
minimalist
meditative
moody
in
a sense of stillness
&
melancholy
concepts
replicas
yet
different
yet
tantalising
&
haunting
Copyright © Brian Strand | Year Posted 2023
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