Notes About The Poem

THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FREED VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment

Proviso a Freed Verse

PROVISO
atmosphere
still &calm
a source
  of light
exquisite
  elegant
unprecedented
anticipated


 intriguingly
 the
 quietude:
is more perplexing
mysterious
& elusive
 shadowy
minimalist
 meditative
moody
in
a sense of stillness
&
melancholy
concepts
replicas

yet
different
yet
 tantalising
&
  haunting
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