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** This proverb has been a favorite quote of mine for many years. **

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Proverbial Monoku

~     Mouths breathe life or loss ... attend your words like treasure, or drown in their haste.     ~




9/7/18


"Those who guard their lips preserve their lives, but those who speak rashly will come to ruin." - Proverbs 13:3
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Gauthier Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 8:43 PM
Well penned, Gregory. Congrats on your well deserved gold medal.
Barden Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 3:22 AM
That's very kind of you, Line - thank you! :-)
Roper Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 7:28 PM
Nicely done and so very true, Greg, congratulations on your win. ~`* Hugs Eve
Barden Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 3:22 AM
You are always so sweet, Eve, thank you so much! :-) <3
Rodrigues Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 5:15 PM
Congrats, Greg!
Barden Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 3:22 AM
Thank you so much, Kim! :-) <3
Dietrich Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 5:02 PM
wow, Perfecto, Greg. I am glad to see us on this list at least!! Congratulations!
Barden Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 3:21 AM
Thank you very much, Andrea, that means a lot to me! :-) <3
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 4:40 PM
Oh this is perfect Greg! Congratulations on your deserving first placement! : )
Barden Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 3:21 AM
Many kind thank-you's Connie - I'm pleased you like it! :-) <3
Rowe Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 2:59 PM
Really great. This one has always been a favorite of mine as well... although I'm not sure it is this exact verse... many variations of it are throughout Proverbs.
Barden Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 3:20 AM
Yes, that's true, Jesse, and many variations, depending on the version of the Bible that you use ... all carry similar weight and import, and wisdom! Blessings and thanks, my friend! :-)
Canerdy Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 1:49 PM
Excellent WINNER, Greg! Janice
Barden Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 3:19 AM
Thanks so much, Janice! :-) <3
Watson Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 1:29 PM
A wonderful interpretation of such an important reminder to us, Greg.
Barden Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 3:19 AM
That's very sweet of you, Wendy - thank you! :-) <3
Harper Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 7:32 PM
Yes, so true, very good re-visioning of it
Barden Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 3:18 AM
Thanks so much, Sheri - so appreciated! :-) <3
Watson Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 7:32 AM
A very insightful, clever and pertinent interpretation of the proverb, Gregory.
Barden Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 3:17 AM
Thank you very much, Wendy - blessings! :-) <3
Warrior Avatar
September 8, 2018 at 12:44 PM
Well said my poetic friend...love & proverbs...^WW^
Barden Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 3:17 AM
Thanks so much, ^WW^, I so appreciate your kindness! :-)
Wanter Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 2:17 PM
Oh, so true - Thank you, Lord, I didn't stay drowned! How smart you are!
Barden Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 7:37 PM
Amen! Blessings and thanks, Sunlite! :-) <3
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 9:52 AM
Ooh that's good. My best to you! xomo <3
Barden Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 7:37 PM
Thanks so much, Dear Mo! :-) <3
Rodrigues Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 8:57 AM
Love this! Well done, my friend!
Barden Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 7:37 PM
Many kind thank you's to you, Kim - I appreciate it! :-) <3
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