Trey Hamner Poet Monoku

Proverbial Monoku

If you chastise me, we are allies
Don't disguise the truth; verbalize









                                                   8-17-2018

Proverbs 27:5 "Open rebuke is better than love carefully concealed." NKJV

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Line Gauthier September 17, 2018 at 8:48 PM Congrats on your podium finish, Trey.

Eve Roper September 17, 2018 at 7:34 PM Great rewrite on your Proverb, Trey , congratulations on your win. ~`* Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich September 17, 2018 at 5:15 PM Nicely done. Congrats for your win.

Wendy Watson September 6, 2018 at 1:20 AM I think you've captured the essence of this proverb admirably, Trey.