Proud To Be Odd

He is a failure, my cousin Tee said.
How so?  
He had two businesses, neither of them made it.
Yes, he is a loser, Cousin Dexter chimed in.

What were they?
A bakery, and a laundry mat.
So he can bake and do laundry! I said smartly. Sounds like a good catch.
They both laughed.

What does he do now?  They did not know, so I found out.
He works at a Wal-mart, I told them. He is the manager.

So I asked them, “instead of a failure, would it be possible that he successfully
Eliminated two careers for one that is working for him now?”

My cousins looked at me.
You are odd, Dexter said. Tee nodded.
I smiled, proud to be odd.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Awtry Avatar
December 7, 2018 at 4:15 PM
I loved this! AND your "nutshell" comment below :)
Krutsinger Avatar
December 7, 2018 at 4:33 PM
Thank you P.S.
Mcferran Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 4:40 PM
Such a WONDERFUL way to set them straight!! Love it, my odd soul-sister!! ;)
Mcferran Avatar
December 7, 2018 at 6:57 AM
Ooooh, that comment needs to be a poem!!! LOVE it! ;D
Krutsinger Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 8:36 PM
My 8-year-old daughter walked up into a pasture with a wild horse once, and the wild horse which was truly WILD walked right up to her, and she petted it. My dad, her grandfather turned to me and said "Wild knows wild."
C. Joshua  Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 11:40 AM
What a subtle way to teach and correct a wrong impression. I see wisdom here. Failure isn't failure until we quit. You're a great teacher, I'm touched my this.
Krutsinger Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 3:37 PM
Thank you. I successfully eliminated 27 jobs that were not for me. Some I let go of before the W-2 paperwork was signed. Startled a lot of people,but kept going "until I finally got it right."
Gauthier Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 9:47 AM
Delightful, Caren. A wonderful message!
Krutsinger Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 11:22 AM
My family in a nutshell, no pun intended.
Asbury Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 6:54 AM
I love you cause you ARE odd - sweetly and wonderfully odd. I am right here being your odd sister!!
Krutsinger Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 7:19 AM
Thank you my little odd-mate. I appreciate you!
Kiser Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 6:09 AM
Only the "odd ones" see reality but, I prefer to call them, prophets, visionaries or gifted.
Krutsinger Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 7:20 AM
Hahaha And you were not born in my family, isn't that a shame? I am claiming you anyway, Sister-of-my-heart.
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