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Proud Dad Bird

Sprinting stick legs carry my midday mission Stiff breeze whips sand, removes thin prints Bringing crammed crab, grabbed in precision Urgent payps brief cease brings peace distinct Assembled nest, scattered pebbles and shells Ginger plumage scurrier is ever alert mother Concaves place, away from encroaching swells Secure dunes' hush is sanctity discovered In salt hazed mauve dusk, we pace wary guard Time arrived for tawny fluff puffs to be shown Harsh beach to danger prone, threat imparted Leaving nest safety is necessary, wider zones Buffeted by their new found brilliance, babies float Skimmed surface of sand, brisk, excited, whisked Proud Daddy plover observes with deserved gloat Dedicated duty rewards during moments like this Written: 25th July 2020 Contest: Bird Personification Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Date: 8/3/2020 4:29:00 AM
Beautiful description about Plover. For the first time I am learning about it through your lovely poem that's filled with imageries and tender emotions.Congratulations on your win Sigrid sir.:-)Keep writing and keep inspiring us. Take care.Warm regards~Deepa:-)
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Date: 8/2/2020 4:14:00 AM
This is a delightful poem of a plover with gorgeous imagery. Congratulations on your win Sigrid :)
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Date: 8/1/2020 12:52:00 PM
Sigrid, congratulations on your winning placement, lovely imagery in this one!
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Date: 7/27/2020 9:46:00 AM
Heartfelt poem, nicely crafted.
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Date: 7/26/2020 6:45:00 PM
Hello Sigrid ... oh to be a plover of the shoreline. Such an interesting bird as you have described in your poem. Pity on Melbourne's shores, plovers suffer because of dog walkers and too much human activity - thanks Sigrid - Lindsay
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 7/27/2020 12:28:00 AM
Indeed. Afraid to say, the desirable Melbourne beaches are not very inviting. I remember another type of plover, swooping to protect nests at edge of school oval. Whereabouts are you based?
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 7/27/2020 12:27:00 AM
Indeed. Afraid to say, the desirable Melbourne beaches are not very inviting. I remember another type of plover, swooping to protect nests at edge of school oval. Whereabouts are you based?
Date: 7/24/2020 9:43:00 PM
This is a delightful personification. Your wonderful wording and imagery give the poem color, charm and life. Good luck in the contest.
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 7/24/2020 9:50:00 PM
Thank you! Thanks for return stop by!

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