Paula Swanson Poet Verse

Proud Beauty

Stark and Majestic it stands,
wearing a corona of clouds,
that flows from behind and expands, 
giving you the feeling it's proud,
of its crags and rugged beauty,
that it spied, reflected, in the sea.


For the contest; Another Nature Verse
Sponsored by John Freeman
Placement: 3rd

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Zzzzz Zzzzz October 5, 2011 at 11:11 AM Imaginative and poetic...I like it.

Carol Sunshine Brown October 3, 2011 at 9:39 AM Congratulations on your win in the "Another, Nature Verse" contest Paula. Love, Carol

John Freeman October 2, 2011 at 4:42 PM Paula, the feeling it gives is proud, Thanks dear one for your patronage to my contest. Agape, Moses

Lee Ramage October 2, 2011 at 1:40 AM My apologies for taking so long to send congratulations but I have not been well. I am sending congrats now. Take care. Lee

Dr.Ram Mehta October 1, 2011 at 12:33 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, Paula

Bob Quigley October 1, 2011 at 10:50 AM Great write. Congratulations Paula

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 1, 2011 at 12:22 AM Congrats Paula on another great win with these lovely lines my friend..luv..

Russell Sivey September 23, 2011 at 11:43 PM This is such a wonderful write depicting the picture given! Very descriptive and full of rich imagery! I love your poem!! Good luck in the contest!!

Andrea Dietrich September 23, 2011 at 11:14 PM Paula, I love your clear description. Just lovely. I think line one has a typo. Luv , Andrea ps. I admired your taking a stand in the blogs! Paula Swanson September 24, 2011 at 12:11 AM Thanks for the heads up and your support.