Protecting the Peace

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A wild bitter wind pushes me along this empty path, that I have rambled before many, many a time; but this day I am feeling winters anger and wrath, and though cloudy there is a beauty sublime . . . A stone cross marker stands protecting the peace, and raven calls far and near in the cemetery- never cease. _____________________________ September 27, 2019 Poetry/Rhyme/Protecting the Peace Copyright Protected, ID 19-1184-348-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Make It Six sponsor, Joseph May Third Place Inspiration Pic #2

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Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 10/3/2019 10:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Wonderful narrative of the image.

Constance La France
Date: 10/3/2019 10:59:00 PM

Subimal, thanks so much for the wonderful and congratulations!

Joseph May

Date: 10/3/2019 8:19:00 PM

A poignant write DH, Congrats on your win

Constance La France
Date: 10/3/2019 10:59:00 PM

Joseph, thanks for the contest and my fine place, appreciate !

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/27/2019 10:19:00 PM

This is so genuine and original... I enjoyed reading very much. God bless you

Constance La France
Date: 9/28/2019 8:46:00 AM

Regina thanks for the compliment!

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/27/2019 11:50:00 AM

You have described exactly what I went through once, on a winter day in a graveyard with the raven calling. Well done :)

Constance La France
Date: 9/27/2019 11:55:00 AM

Heidi, thanks for visiting, when I saw that image I knew that it was the one I would write about because like you I have been there in the cemetery on a winter day ~