Proposal

Proposal

We were there and now are not
We were free and now are caught
in a web that set us free
with simple phrase
“please, marry me.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Davis Avatar
July 14, 2014 at 8:12 AM
John A unique and interesting twist on a special and romantic event. thank you for the great comment on my What I Gave poem.
Dietrich Avatar
April 3, 2014 at 9:33 PM
a web that set us free. What a contradiction in terms, and I really like this one, John!!
Torres Avatar
April 3, 2014 at 7:10 AM
this is so sweet, John!! ..:')) a very unique proposal.. well done!! ^_^
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