Proportionally Distorted

"proportionally distorted"


she walked away
sighing so it
seems

it's
all a
big lie

sighs
matters
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodrigues Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 7:51 AM
Ooh…so well done! A lotta body in a few momentous words
Connelly Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 8:54 AM
She was quite bawdy lolol... Thanks so much Kim. I really appreciate that you took the time to read and comment
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