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Proportionally Distorted

"proportionally distorted" she walked away sighing so it seems it's all a big lie sighs matters

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/27/2023 7:51:00 AM

Ooh…so well done! A lotta body in a few momentous words

Jeff Connelly
Date: 8/27/2023 8:54:00 AM

She was quite bawdy lolol... Thanks so much Kim. I really appreciate that you took the time to read and comment

Tom Woody

Date: 8/26/2023 5:50:00 AM

Ha! There are some who would argue that sighs don't matter.

Jeff Connelly
Date: 8/26/2023 5:52:00 AM

Lololol, so true Tom. Thanks for commenting