Proper Order

Left behind and rightfully replaced.
Engulfed in down tempo while falling up.
Breadcrumb trails lead to sought out place.
Care for self and ignore the schlup.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 10:59 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, and lots of inspiration . Love, Carol
Culverhouse Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 5:39 AM
interesting confusion!
Mehta Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 5:26 AM
Yes I agree care for self and ignore the schlup, Heidi
Bagnall Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 5:22 AM
An interesting puzzle, but I have to admit I need more clues.....
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