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Proof of Life

PROOF OF LIFE

My tears fall as rain --
Silver ponds of broken dreams;
Proof that I live.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 17, 2010 at 11:13 AM
Congrats Deb on your well deserved win.Don't know how I missed this one-kashinath
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December 17, 2010 at 8:29 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Rick, Deb
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December 17, 2010 at 7:59 AM
How did I miss this moving haiku earlier? So glad I had the chance to read it now that it has made the winners' circle, Deb. If we can't feel, we are not truly "alive." Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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December 17, 2010 at 7:26 AM
Congrats Deb on your big win in Rick's contest with this exciting entry on flowing water my friend.. enjoy with luv..
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December 17, 2010 at 3:42 AM
Very clever indeed Deb. I so love these little masterpieces by the poets on here, and this one is exceptional >> James :)
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December 16, 2010 at 10:09 PM
This is really good, Deb, just love it. congrats on your deserved placement in contest. Harry
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December 16, 2010 at 9:57 PM
Wow, this one is so profound, deb. A big congratulations to you and now that the winners' list is up, I hope many people will come see this gem!!
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December 9, 2010 at 8:27 PM
VERY nice, Deb. I think I saw a movie of this title once. It's a great title to use for your poem as well. LUv, Andrea
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