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Proof of Life

PROOF OF LIFE My tears fall as rain -- Silver ponds of broken dreams; Proof that I live.

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Kash Poet

Date: 12/17/2010 11:13:00 AM

Congrats Deb on your well deserved win.Don't know how I missed this one-kashinath

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/17/2010 8:29:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Rick, Deb

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/17/2010 7:59:00 AM

How did I miss this moving haiku earlier? So glad I had the chance to read it now that it has made the winners' circle, Deb. If we can't feel, we are not truly "alive." Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/17/2010 7:26:00 AM

Congrats Deb on your big win in Rick's contest with this exciting entry on flowing water my friend.. enjoy with luv..

James Fraser

Date: 12/17/2010 3:42:00 AM

Very clever indeed Deb. I so love these little masterpieces by the poets on here, and this one is exceptional >> James :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/16/2010 10:09:00 PM

This is really good, Deb, just love it. congrats on your deserved placement in contest. Harry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/16/2010 9:57:00 PM

Wow, this one is so profound, deb. A big congratulations to you and now that the winners' list is up, I hope many people will come see this gem!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/9/2010 8:27:00 PM

VERY nice, Deb. I think I saw a movie of this title once. It's a great title to use for your poem as well. LUv, Andrea