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Promising Stars

A small boy is playing baseball in a Summer afternoon.
Imaging that some day would be a famous baseball player.
The group of girls are training to compete someday in an
Olympiad.
They played sports for hours to achieve their most desired dream.

Tim hits a home run for first time in his short time of being playing 
Baseball.
He runs the nine innings to assure success in his sports life.
Determination is one of the most valuable traits of Tim.
A star is shining, promising to be an unforgettable Baseball player 
to the Baseball Hall of Fame.

Christie and Marien dream to be famous gymnasts in a far future.
They go to the park every day with Tim to let free their imagination.
Perseverance and discipline will be the factors to fulfill the children dreams.
Time will tell if our protagonists reach their goals in life.

Twenty years has passed in Tim, Christie and Marien lives. They are grown up.
Tim is a famous Baseball player known worldwide. His name appears in the
Baseball Hall of Fame.
Christie and Marien compete in an Olympiad. Won gold medal in a gymnastic competition.
Reach for the stars. Every worth while deserves to be tried at least once.

For Oil Paintings 4 & 5
Sponsored by Eve Roper
Third Place

Nayda Ivette
11-19-2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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December 16, 2015 at 9:24 PM
NAYDA :) CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN...... SKAT
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December 16, 2015 at 10:02 PM
Thank you very much SKAT.
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