Promises

Thank you for the promises
       You gave me hope to cling to...
       To carry with me all my life
       I've kept them in my backpack
       I've seen them written in the sky
       I've seen them in the sunrise
       I've seen them in my children's eyes...

Thank you for the promises
      I've felt them soothe my spirit
      Like the sunshine gently warms the grain
      Like the moon shines over sleeping hills
      And the dawn brings sound of needed rain 

And now I sit here upon the steps
    that I have always known
    I recall that endless summer eve
       that went beyond the river's calm....

    A promise made, that you would be
       always here,....right next to me

       And now that I have grown,....
                I look, but I can't see you,.... 

                                          But, I can feel you in the wind    ..................
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     Francine's Contest: Gordon Lightfoot's Song:   "Thank You  For The Promises"
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Roberts Avatar
May 6, 2012 at 10:58 AM
thanks for entering Carrie and congrats on your seventh place win
Brown Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 11:16 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Lightfoot" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Burch Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 9:30 AM
Congrats on your win Carrie and on all your wins!!! well done my friend!!! big hugs, love ya deb
Reed Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 6:29 AM
This is a terrific write... and I miss you... JackReed3
Rhinem Avatar
May 1, 2012 at 4:27 PM
Smile ~ "Hi Baby, This Is Beautiful & You Are Beautiful &, 'I Love You, Forever;'" John!:) ~
Williams Avatar
May 1, 2012 at 2:12 PM
Carrie superb good luck..David
Amadore Avatar
May 1, 2012 at 1:48 PM
Good work....good luck in the contest.
Andresen Avatar
May 1, 2012 at 1:35 PM
A wonderful poem Carrie it is a pleasure to read it. This one must be a win poem in the contest, wish you good luck!!! :) - oxox love Anne-Lise
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