Promises
In your deep gaze
one day I dived up
I felt the world overturned
on island of love woke up ...
Your eyes dreamed reveries
but it had a distant glow
in special strange world lived
just a passerby sans soul.
Your look made me captive
for the promise made inactive
innocuous offer did not succeed
it wasn't what it looked to be
promised sweet paradise to me
but instead was hell and agony!
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