Promised Whispers

A chill does fall this evening air Drifting soft neath heaven’s flame Star light flickers we may share For love that sings its own refrain In chorus of a calling breeze Aloft of wooded heights so high When nestled soft upon my knees To stare into this painted sky For but this light that finds me here In distant galleries so swept A touch that never shall let go Forever closely to be kept I cling to every thought I bear Now caught so tight of passion’s flow Found blessings that we come to share With praises which our hearts bestow Along a tiny twisting way So now defined by skies above When journeys turn our minds astray We reach back towards illumined love As all that time shall come to pass When waking bells their ring is true My deed, my destiny, my task To send this endless love to you And here upon this weary ground Between the shadows now at play I dream within affection found In promised whispers sent your way
Everyone have a great weekend, see you again on Monday

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 11/29/2016 5:26:00 PM
Added to my fav list as this one sings of greatness and enduring love.. Superb writing..
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Chris Green
Date: 11/29/2016 5:43:00 PM
Thanks again Robert for your encouraging comment about my poem and thank you so much for the fav. I appreciate your visit today.
Date: 11/25/2016 10:40:00 PM
You have mastered imagery usage. Your poetry tells a story of the heart and paints it in vibrant vivid color making the emotion all the more potent.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/28/2016 9:12:00 AM
Thank you Christy for your always kind thoughts about my poetry. I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 11/25/2016 7:46:00 PM
I simply adore your poetry! Have a great one, Chris!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/28/2016 9:11:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend. I'm happy you do.
Date: 11/25/2016 6:12:00 PM
I am really engrossed reading your poetry. I enjoyed it.I hope you had a nice weekend.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/28/2016 9:11:00 AM
Thank you so much Darlene. My weekend was very nice, I hope yours was too.
Date: 11/25/2016 6:02:00 PM
Anything promised is beautiful because it means commitment.Now the whispers make it extra soft and special.Lovely.Happy Weekend Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/25/2016 6:05:00 PM
Thank you Charmaine for your wonderful comment. Have a great weekend too my sweet friend.
Date: 11/25/2016 6:01:00 PM
Thank you for sharing such a beautiful poem with us before leaving. Enjoy the weekend.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/25/2016 6:05:00 PM
Thank you my sweet friend. I hope you and Bella have a wonderful weekend. :)
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