Promised Tides

On a lonely pier of weathered wood and salt water etchings, beneath a moonlit mosaic on a cloudless sky Stained glass brush strokes cling to a northern horizon as I cast my heart afloat, wishing on a promised tide that it reaches you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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November 18, 2016 at 2:22 PM
I'm floating within your charmed sentiments. :)
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November 18, 2016 at 4:55 PM
Thanks so very much my sweet friend. I am happy you liked my little poem.
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November 18, 2016 at 8:26 AM
Lovely !!!
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November 18, 2016 at 8:33 AM
Thank you Charmaine.
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November 17, 2016 at 9:11 PM
Beautiful...
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November 18, 2016 at 8:23 AM
Thanks so much Tim.
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November 17, 2016 at 7:57 PM
Hi Chris, I love reading your poetic lines. Because they transport me to another place. This is so romantic and the imagery is amazing. I hope she reads this write and see how much she is loved."Stained glass brush strokes cling to a northern horizon as I cast my heart afloat," Are words that can just make a girls heart melt. Well done. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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November 18, 2016 at 8:23 AM
Thank you so much Alexis. Your kindness is always appreciated.
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November 17, 2016 at 7:28 PM
This is so nice. You write such beautiful poems. I love stained glass. It makes me think of the stained glass windows in my house (some with designs of angels). :)
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November 18, 2016 at 8:22 AM
Thank you Heidi, I always appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my poems.
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