Paloma P Poet Alliteration

Promised a Poesy Garden

In the shadows of a
    darkly relinquished night,
 an unrelenting musing beast struck
       presenting a proposition,
         as he pranced about
           viscous vision's intentions,
promised a copious poesy garden
        'tween early morn's
            buttercup metaphors
              & dusk's poppy delusions,
danced 'til lavishly penned spirits
    were indubitably unleashed 
        exploding 'neath elliptical eclipses;
whence the sun it did bounteously appear
    midst all its magnificent splendor,
        whilst Delphic inky nectar dripped
           deliberately descending beyond
                   hellbent scripted passages,
           vying vaporous voids of creation 
                'pon prolifically paradisaical poetry

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James Inman November 6, 2016 at 8:18 PM Not only well written alliteration but wonderful imagery as well.

Lim'Rik Flats November 4, 2016 at 11:18 PM well now I's green with envy... that's a heckuva garden salad! Paloma P November 5, 2016 at 8:31 AM You don't say. :) Can't beat your vegetales!

Daniel Turner October 8, 2016 at 8:58 AM I certainly hope he doesn't come around me! I love the alliteration and actually find this amusing, Paloma. I know mental blocks aren't funny but i found your description humorous. Paloma P October 8, 2016 at 9:38 AM So, mission accomplished! I'll try to persuade her to keep her distance. :)