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Promised a Poesy Garden

In the shadows of a darkly relinquished night, an unrelenting musing beast struck presenting a proposition, as he pranced about viscous vision's intentions, promised a copious poesy garden 'tween early morn's buttercup metaphors & dusk's poppy delusions, danced 'til lavishly penned spirits were indubitably unleashed exploding 'neath elliptical eclipses; whence the sun it did bounteously appear midst all its magnificent splendor, whilst Delphic inky nectar dripped deliberately descending beyond hellbent scripted passages, vying vaporous voids of creation 'pon prolifically paradisaical poetry

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Date: 11/6/2016 8:18:00 PM
Not only well written alliteration but wonderful imagery as well.
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Date: 11/4/2016 11:18:00 PM
well now I's green with envy... that's a heckuva garden salad!
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Paloma P
Date: 11/5/2016 8:31:00 AM
You don't say. :) Can't beat your vegetales!
Date: 10/8/2016 8:58:00 AM
I certainly hope he doesn't come around me! I love the alliteration and actually find this amusing, Paloma. I know mental blocks aren't funny but i found your description humorous.
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Paloma P
Date: 10/8/2016 9:38:00 AM
So, mission accomplished! I'll try to persuade her to keep her distance. :)

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