Promise of Love

?*The Promise Of Love*?

Promise Of Love
Under An Ocean Filled With Feelings
Where wild thoughts take place 
But at a low race
Emotions And Emotions Killing Blurred Thoughts In High Rate

 Only two could understand 
In a high level standard
Is It Love Promised To Hurt?
To them was made to heal
Obstacles Formed To Make Em Fall Buh It Turned To Exquisite 
Took it to sunny days 
Where love dried them from the rain of emotions 
Where Love Found Bond To Control Thoughts Of Others
Compliments flowed like rivers 
Trust like oceans 
But loyalty like heavens
Honesty Like Flowers, Eyes Filled With Tears Of Powers
Hearts pounding with joy 
Is it love or just feelings?
Feelings But Soon To Fade Away Slowly

Drifting away 
Slowly like the earth rotation
Although It Felt Like Pain. Love Always Find Mates Till Separation 
They have shown their quality 
But was it unconditional?
Painted With Broken Promises Will It Take Them Far?
 They have gone through this kind of pain 
Stronger they are willing but still have the fear
Letters From That To This, Heart To Body, Beauty To Brains .
But the bright and sunny day has come 
Rejoicing with happiness

And That's The Promise Of *Love*?

By : Lutricia??
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Agustin Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 7:54 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed day.
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July 10, 2018 at 1:12 PM
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July 2, 2018 at 3:27 PM
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June 26, 2018 at 6:04 AM
I enjoyed your pleasant and happy write of love this morning!
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