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Promise of love

?*The Promise Of Love*? Promise Of Love Under An Ocean Filled With Feelings Where wild thoughts take place But at a low race Emotions And Emotions Killing Blurred Thoughts In High Rate Only two could understand In a high level standard Is It Love Promised To Hurt? To them was made to heal Obstacles Formed To Make Em Fall Buh It Turned To Exquisite Took it to sunny days Where love dried them from the rain of emotions Where Love Found Bond To Control Thoughts Of Others Compliments flowed like rivers Trust like oceans But loyalty like heavens Honesty Like Flowers, Eyes Filled With Tears Of Powers Hearts pounding with joy Is it love or just feelings? Feelings But Soon To Fade Away Slowly Drifting away Slowly like the earth rotation Although It Felt Like Pain. Love Always Find Mates Till Separation They have shown their quality But was it unconditional? Painted With Broken Promises Will It Take Them Far? They have gone through this kind of pain Stronger they are willing but still have the fear Letters From That To This, Heart To Body, Beauty To Brains . But the bright and sunny day has come Rejoicing with happiness And That's The Promise Of *Love*? By : Lutricia??

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Date: 7/10/2018 1:12:00 PM
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Date: 7/2/2018 3:27:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup! You're going to love it here. Read and comment on others poets writes and they will do the same for you. Take a minute to come check out my latest write. Looking forward to reading more of your work!
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Date: 6/26/2018 6:04:00 AM
I enjoyed your pleasant and happy write of love this morning!
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