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"promise"

Please don't They are angry At us for deceiving Wounded We're left in this cold alley Thrown like dog's Im waiting for the right time But my pulse is not going so fast as when they were here Because of a religion im a target Because i want to be myself They want me And my beloved Please tell me your ok Tell me is over now All she asked me My self with frozen tears falling down Answered A little bit longer and we are gonna be in heaven She said i am lying I said Sometimes truth is hidden between lies She want's me to hold her tight But we must play dead until every one else die I asked her back Do you remember? When We met each other Playing dead with the dogs She said back I do And look at us now Playing dead again with death by the side I told her there how much i loved her She stood quiet After long seconds she said with her trembling voice Me too Snow is cold Heart is not strong I told her to focus It was gonna be over soon Then she said repeated i love you Then i stood quiet I was gonna say love you too When a soldier jumped at us and started shooting at the dead bodies I looked at her pretty eyes Her frozen lips i say the move and i spelled "I Love You" Right there bullets got her Her blood was every were The soldier wasted all his bullets Then he left My cried there But the cold didn't my tears fall Frozen Two nights later The invasion was over I was able to stop playing dead I ran to her body And hug it tight Saying sorry and repeating i love you hundreds of times For that time the sun shined bright on that solo tunnel I looked at the sun with fear And asked why did she left... She promise me before they came here she wasn't gonna die Not with my son inside Then tears broke from my eyes like a river Two lives in one How can that embrace my life Then i stood up and walked away Leaving behind The note i never lend to her... Note: My love, much time have passed since last time, i am most certain i haven't called either send a picture of me, but everything is fine, hope you are too, by the way i wanted to remind you how much and how strong i love you, i promise one thing, I will not die, you will see me one more time, a time that will cut forever, hope the sun is burning bright there, i heard snow is bad, i will come back home in 6 days, ti'll then put your love on the pocket, i'll be back home darling... Much Love, your Husband Wes Ortiz

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/8/2010 10:08:00 AM
deep, Derek! Strong emotions from both sides'
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