Promise

Break me
Haha try your hardest. You never will. You've already taken everything you could. Your no 
savior. No saint. You take lives and tell people it's their time. You don't save. You sin. No one 
should have their life taken from them. You took his life. Their lives. Young people, with their 
whole life ahead of them. Their lives full of hopes and dreams and promises. You know 
nothing. I will never serve . Never learn. Never give a rats ass about you. Spare their lives . 
Take mine instead. I dare you. I dare you...Do it!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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