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We were both going to college. Science class is where we both met, I was astonished at his knowledge. My thoughts of him more than friends, as some girls eyed him with his letter-man sweatshirt. He was tall and looked so handsome. When the day's classes were over, he would walk me to my car. Sweet dreams of him I yearn to be my lover. He had a way of setting a forbidden fire within, soft and warm, revealing beauty that lived a resting place of a pure soul of sin. He would press his head upon my neck And would whisper," Would you." Time ticked away, a kiss he would peck. Just one little word, that's all I needed. The prolonged suspense had taken its toll. My words were heated as, “No!” I pleaded. 3/10/2023 Pick-A-Title, Vol 35 Poetry Contest 2. Prolonged Suspense Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 3/26/2023 9:04:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this fantastic poem, Eve:-) I loved it.
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Date: 3/24/2023 7:43:00 PM
Eve, many hearty congratulations on your Contest win! Spotless vibes you portray.
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Date: 3/23/2023 7:39:00 PM
Freedom of expression , Naked truth. Congratulations on your win, Eve.
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Date: 3/23/2023 3:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/story/picture/ending. I enjoyed this one very much. Have a blessed day writing....................
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Date: 3/12/2023 6:25:00 PM
It same like a yes but no prevailed, I enjoyed the suspense in your verse Eve, best wishes
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Date: 3/12/2023 4:54:00 PM
As we all know, prolonged suspense can be excruciating. You've expressed this moment so beautifully and with so much emotion. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear friend. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 3/12/2023 11:01:00 AM
Wonderfully dwelling in yesteryears of youth, Eve. Harkening back to college days spring up many memories--as you so well illustrated. Best to you.
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Date: 3/11/2023 8:59:00 PM
As “no” I pleaded! Love it!
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Date: 3/11/2023 1:30:00 AM
Well argued, Eve. Best for a win. Hugs
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Date: 3/10/2023 2:43:00 PM
A word every man hates to hear, Eve:) made me smile. have a great weekend.
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Date: 3/12/2023 4:43:00 PM
Smiling @ You, Daniel. :) Hearing no certainly does something to a guys ego.

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