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Prolonged Suspense

We were both going to college. 
Science class is where we both met, 
I was astonished at his knowledge. 

My thoughts of him more than friends, 
as some girls eyed him with his letter-man sweatshirt.
He was tall and looked so handsome. 

When the day's classes were over, 
he would walk me to my car. 
Sweet dreams of him I yearn to be my lover.

He had a way of setting a forbidden fire within, 
soft and warm, revealing beauty that lived 
a resting place of a pure soul of sin.

He would press his head upon my neck 
And would whisper," Would you."
Time ticked away, a kiss he would peck.

Just one little word, that's all I needed. 
The prolonged suspense had taken its toll. 
My words were heated as, “No!” I pleaded.

3/10/2023

Pick-A-Title, Vol 35 Poetry Contest 2. Prolonged Suspense
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ibeh Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 9:04 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this fantastic poem, Eve:-) I loved it.
Poet Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 7:43 PM
Eve, many hearty congratulations on your Contest win! Spotless vibes you portray.
Freedom of expression , Naked truth. Congratulations on your win, Eve.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 3:07 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/story/picture/ending. I enjoyed this one very much. Have a blessed day writing....................
May Avatar
March 12, 2023 at 6:25 PM
It same like a yes but no prevailed, I enjoyed the suspense in your verse Eve, best wishes
Nicole Avatar
March 12, 2023 at 4:54 PM
As we all know, prolonged suspense can be excruciating. You've expressed this moment so beautifully and with so much emotion. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear friend. Hugs, Brandy
Pandit Avatar
March 12, 2023 at 11:01 AM
Wonderfully dwelling in yesteryears of youth, Eve. Harkening back to college days spring up many memories--as you so well illustrated. Best to you.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 11, 2023 at 8:59 PM
As “no” I pleaded! Love it!
Buhagiar Avatar
March 11, 2023 at 1:30 AM
Well argued, Eve. Best for a win. Hugs
Turner Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 2:43 PM
A word every man hates to hear, Eve:) made me smile. have a great weekend.
Nicole Avatar
March 12, 2023 at 4:43 PM
Smiling @ You, Daniel. :) Hearing no certainly does something to a guys ego.
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