Prolix Pageantry

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*Image of Purple Vanda Orchids Floral & Lei by EFC & Sziv. Prolix Pageantry Pulsations of veinuous royalty courtesies yond the proverbial realm. Majestic interludes flamboyantly acquired vesper's affections, overwhelm. Cupid cedes ecliptic earth's lauded star, hauling affianced light neath golden rays. Purple Vanda orchids in gild's wake are velvety mosaic succeeding phase. Proxy promises bonny lavenders pealing gingerly as princely petals induce a princesses verbs. Challengers submit an amethyst crown ... all settles. Hawaii's champ, amaranthine Vandas laurel leis, like Purple Heart's ... lifespan 'twas. 2022 June 01 *2nd Place* Purple Flowers ~~Nayda Ivette Negron Flores: Judged 2022 June 25 *HMS: 10 syllables per x 14 lines = 140 syllables RZ: RhymeScheme; abab, cdcd, efef, gg.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/26/2022 8:50:00 AM

Congratulations on this win. A wonderful tribute to your purple flowers. Enjoy your day/week with blessings...........

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/26/2022 9:03:00 AM

Thank you, Paula, for your kind sentiments my friend, Aloha~William

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/26/2022 1:05:00 AM

Beautiful narration. Congratulations!

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/26/2022 1:49:00 AM

Thank you, Christuraj, your sentiments are well received my friend, Aloha~William

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/25/2022 8:30:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning placement, William... Very well-deserved dear friend. Best regards

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/26/2022 12:26:00 AM

I am appreciative, Lasaad, for your generous thoughts my friend, Aloha~William

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/1/2022 4:19:00 AM

Enjoyed the beauty of your poem--apt for the flowers it describes. Ornate words.

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/1/2022 8:55:00 AM

Welcomed expressions, Vijay, I've always appreciated your thoughts my friend, Aloha~William