Linda Alice Fowler Poet Other

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Minichu form – Mohan Chutani 

Prohibition

They asked for distillment.
I gave them greater than what they said was desired.
Fulfillment

Came the sheriff.
Came church officials who’d been hired.
Tariff

The men,
bottles acquired.
Sin

They asked for distillment.
Came church officials who’d been hired.
Sin

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Jan Allison March 10, 2025 at 5:38 PM this is such a challenging form Linda Alice, I find it difficult to get it to make sense - you certainly wrote this very well:-) hugs Jan xx Linda Alice Fowler March 10, 2025 at 6:15 PM Many thanks Jan. I like a good challenge every now and then. :)

Joe Maverick March 5, 2025 at 12:04 AM Message has been bottled..The truth cannot Be thoittled..' Annon and on.) Linda Alice Fowler March 6, 2025 at 8:49 AM Heheheh Joe. Nice of you to comment. I was thinking of the movie, "The Untouchables", the other day and, well, you see what happened. LOL :)

Paula Goldsmith March 3, 2025 at 9:35 AM What a powerful write. Have a great day writing away..................... Linda Alice Fowler March 3, 2025 at 10:03 AM Thank you Paula. Make it a fabulous day! hugs :)