Carol Mays Poet Free verse

Progressive Rock

On the energy waves of the eons,
Of lyric and line ever-forming,
One is injected, transported,
With all vibrations bursting
Through the human heart and mind,
The jolting edge of innovation
And every positive passion.

Even the cynic or child may sense,
When riding such a current,
The power native to humanity.
Synapses now malfunctioning
Cannot forever thwart their charge.
Mankind has the voltage needed
To mobilize all the connectors.

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Kj Force March 10, 2015 at 12:20 PM Carole...your poem jolts the "Vibs" that still "currently " " transport " through every nerve in my body....wow.. rock on...with a passion.. Carol Mays March 11, 2015 at 8:07 PM Thank you so much for your comments!

Paul Callus February 20, 2015 at 10:43 AM Hi Carol! You write with conviction and passion; energy waves and vibrations find their way to both heart and mind. Very expressive final two lines. #7 // paul Carol Mays February 21, 2015 at 9:08 PM Hi, Paul. I appreciate your comments. This poem was written many years ago. I would like to get some of that conviction and passion back now! Carol

Jaafar Sadig El Waad February 6, 2015 at 2:55 AM all the vibrations bursting through the ...heart and mind is what is felt on reading your beautiul write, though as a novice in poetry I'm still trying to find my way!congrats on your so beautiful verses! short but complete in meaning! Carol Mays February 6, 2015 at 9:20 PM Thanks, Jaafar--That's what I try to do in writing my poems, so I very much appreciate your comments. Carol