Progression To Happiness

One hundred first dates, 
seventy five second dates, 
fifty retakes, 
twenty five out takes, 
all to equal, 
one mistake, 
then,
one forever keepsake.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 8, 2010 at 7:04 PM
Pretty neat poetry Mac and a great accomplishment to attain the keepsake.. nice to see u back on Soup.. I think I understand your contest now and am checking with the poet and poem to enter it... thankxxx..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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