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A lot lies asleep
Man inserts his concrete seed
A building is birthed 
Empty rooms reach the heavens 
Below, homeless live in hell
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Agustin Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 7:30 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Ebel Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 12:25 AM
Short, but with a punch. I rather liked it
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