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shadowy darkness broad laser etches light galaxy opens

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Date: 11/14/2023 9:56:00 AM
Wonderful imagery, the galaxy does open. Enjoyed reading.
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Arlo Parker
Date: 11/14/2023 12:35:00 PM
Appreciate your comments, Eve. :o)
Date: 11/12/2023 12:51:00 PM
wow, I love this...! I felt the galaxy open and move. Well done, Sara
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Arlo Parker
Date: 11/12/2023 8:55:00 PM
Yours to embrace!! Thank you. :o)
Date: 11/9/2023 7:15:00 PM
Wow. Short but profound
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Arlo Parker
Date: 11/10/2023 9:10:00 AM
Like your footles...:o)

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