Profound Verses

It does take patience with patience growth..Enjoyed reading this creative work today...Thanks for stopping by...Your kind review is uplifting..Sara

So much depth in this poem. Insightful view. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comment. Have a good week. Karen

So much to think about in this poem. In looking through your poetry, I couldn't find one that I haven't commented on so I chose this one as it has so much depth. Definitely worth more than one reading. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Hope you will post more poetry soon. Best wishes. Karen

Much to think about here. I've already read it a few times. Interesting use of this short form. Nice job! Thank you for sharing your poetry with us and for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep on writing! Karen

love this profound write, is speaks volume to the mental roledex, take care D-nyce

That quatrain was indeed so magnificent. I happen to have very less knowledge of Urdu poetry but still I love Urdu. Have you read Daagh(I'm forgetting the full name:)) He's my favorite. Hurrah to Urdu!! Allah hafiz. Love, Chitra

Awesome! So true and so beautifully written! Well done. Love, Shar

I believe it. What a great use of this form. Less words make us think much more. I have been learning with these verses only I think. Great job! Love, Chitra