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- This is not written to a special person - But we see many who do not speak the truth, even under oath - They play a dishonorable game ... for power -

- Profound Truth -


So apathetic
Convincing crocodile tears 
Focus on the truth
He felt he mastered this game
The cheats syndrome is revealed








03.10.2018
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Vladislav Raven

October 8, 2018 at 9:11 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, indeed this is a truth. I always believe that untruths shall come back to bite you sooner or later. Everyone would know as soon as a lie left my lips. Sooner or later the truth becomes known. To lie is the cowards way. A strong write Anne-Lise. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 8, 2018 at 12:28 PM

- Yes, very cowardly Mike - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon

October 7, 2018 at 9:56 AM

In the end, the truth prevails. Nice craft, dear Sunshine Smile.

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 8, 2018 at 12:26 PM

- I hope so - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Adeniji :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

October 4, 2018 at 9:18 AM

some sad people in this world, some big liars who hide behind their fakeness....

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 4, 2018 at 1:15 PM

- Cowardly and pathetic ... I will call it, S.O. - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mike Gentile

October 3, 2018 at 2:51 PM

It may not be directed at a specific person but I can think of one right now !!! Well done Anne-Lise xxoo

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 4, 2018 at 1:12 PM

- The fear of losing face ... or the fear of the truth (?) - When someone is revealed with his pants down ... should one speak the truth - Many thanks for your comment, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

October 3, 2018 at 2:37 PM

truth rules, anne... a beauty to reflect on...happy huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 4, 2018 at 1:06 PM

- Many thanks for your comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

October 3, 2018 at 1:24 PM

Truly profound truth my dearest friend, Anne-Lise! I love it! Hugs xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 4, 2018 at 1:05 PM

- Thank you so much Demetrios, for your very kind comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior

October 3, 2018 at 12:25 PM

Oh! very well said in such a few words Anne-Lise...great write...love & light...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 4, 2018 at 1:05 PM

- Thank you so much for your very kind comment, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ilene Bauer

October 3, 2018 at 12:24 PM

well, i know just who this poem makes me think of, anne-lise! you've said it very well...

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 4, 2018 at 1:03 PM

- Not hard to understand who I have in my thoughts .... but they are many ... very many and it scares me - People like this should never have "power", Ilene - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)