Profound Mystic

Watching the clock tick 
I am surrounding myself with walls
unable to find a value
of life or matter
Its unfortunate really,
when the sun is shinning
and the wind is blowing.
The air that fills my lungs with life
is left outside.
Where am I going 
When will I be found
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Kendrick Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 11:32 AM
Congrats on your work being on home page today. Way to go. Sara K
Milie Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 12:14 PM
Thank you
Agustin Avatar
September 12, 2025 at 5:28 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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