Profound

To be what is in the mirror
      To see what a woman should be
      To bloom as the bouquet delivers
      Tied in bonding of hearts emotion
      Lovers Of minds lovers of past times
      We come together from oceans of time 
      Waves of passion within timeless of time
      For the lines of a poet drives into my mind
      Like the jewel in the crown its beauty so profound
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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January 8, 2011 at 6:07 PM
Very thought provoking write Sarah.Enjoyed your poem-kashinath
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October 12, 2010 at 1:45 PM
gives me a good feeling
Kendrick Avatar
October 11, 2010 at 11:28 AM
Enjoyed this work..Yes, the exact work at the right time in our lives is profound....Sara
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October 10, 2010 at 2:31 PM
beautiful write, enjoyed this one...P.D.
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October 10, 2010 at 6:38 AM
Quite compelling, Sarah. Love the irony in "timeless of time." Well done! Love, Carolyn
Nutter Avatar
October 10, 2010 at 6:04 AM
Interesting and imaginative write. Enjoyed the read.
Mehta Avatar
October 10, 2010 at 5:11 AM
Very interesting and self introspective thoughts you have expressed in this write, sarah
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October 10, 2010 at 5:02 AM
The beauty is to be found in the mirror. And the depth of beauty in the soul is above all. Nice poem Sarah >> James
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