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PROFILE - to be read slowly left side now quickly! another glance not becoming left side? – well? perhaps the right side just as bad the resemblance is stiking! my father but as an old man no! i’ll look head-on yes! better i see the once youth memories flood first friends first love and that unbounded energy i’ll not try profile again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/18/2012 4:46:00 PM
Left side, right side, oh goodness knows what the years have done. ha ha. Thanks for your comments on my poem. love phyl
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Date: 2/17/2012 5:48:00 PM
love it Daver..... gets one to musing about your muse. Profiling the profile. Cool
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Date: 2/11/2012 8:15:00 PM
Daver, I HATE my profile. But for different reasons than you give for it here of yours.. Cute poem, my friend.
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Date: 2/8/2012 12:42:00 PM
I look like my Grandpop ! *smiles* Awesome write dear poet ! Have a wonderful week my friend....much love, james....soup-mail sir
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Daver Austin
Date: 2/8/2012 1:22:00 PM
Your Grandpop must be a real cool guy. Love, daver
Date: 2/8/2012 10:40:00 AM
Really enjoyed this witty poem, Daver. I think my situation is the reverse. When I stare "head-on" into the mirror, I see my grandmother. The profiles look better because my long hair hides so much. Great write! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/8/2012 1:24:00 PM
I'm looking at your head-on picture, and you are a knockout! Love, daver

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